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Fic: Goodbye Love,Jared/Jensen ,R

  • Apr. 2nd, 2008 at 3:22 PM
mikeyrhcp: (Jensen)
Title:Goodbye Love
Pairing:Jared/Jensen
Rating:R(just to be safe)
Word count:761
summary:Nothing is the same once Jared made that move.Now its time to say what hurts the most.
Spoilers/Warnings:Angest
Disclaimer:The boys are not mine.Which is really too bad.
Beta: The awesome [profile] lycaness
A/N:So i knew i had to write something once i heard about the engagement. I was bored as shit during one of my classes and this is what came out.But just so we are clear here,im SUPER happy for Jared and Sandy. I love them both so much and only wish them the best.

He walks into the hotel room. He just wants to be alone. He needs to be alone.

It all seems way to wrong. Nothing really makes sense to him anymore. He sits on his big bed and he feels that something is missing. Someone. He stays in complete silence for about 2 hours.

Then he hears the phone ring. He hopes that it's him and wishing that it isn’t at the same time. And when he sees the caller ID he decides not to answer. Nothing good will come out of it. It will only make things a lot worse. It's not a minute later that he hears the phone vibrate indicating he’s got a new text message.

Talk to me. Please.

He reads the message and it hurts more then anything has ever had. He doesn't know what to say. What can he possibly say? There is nothing to talk about .your'e with her now. Or maybe I love you even if you're a fucking ass-hole. He doesn't answer.

He should know better. Jared won't give up. Jensen knows he won't. Maybe deep down he's counting on it. There is a knock on the door and it really doesn't take a genius to figure out who it is. He gets up and walks towards the door. He wants to tell Jared to leave him alone, to get out. Just leave and never talk to him again. But when he opens the door no words come.

He finds that all he wants to do is pull Jared in and kiss the living hell out of him. He doesn't.

"Hey," Jared says.

Jensen tries to think of something to say. Nothing seems right. Jared walks in and Jensen closes the door after him.

"Jen, I'm…sorry. I'm-" he's begins but Jensen cuts him off.

"You're sorry? What do you mean you're sorry? Sorry doesn't cut it, Jared." Not Jay. Jared, he says before he can stop and think. Jared looks surprised. Maybe even hurt. And all Jensen wants to do is take it back. And he fucking hates the fact that he's feeling guilty when it should be the other way around.

"I don't… I don't know what to say," Jared confesses.

He wants to say, Me neither. "Jared" he says and tries to make his voice steady. "Wh-why did you do it?" He's so afraid to hear Jared answer. Please don't say you love her. He begs to someone. Anyone. No one. But of course that someone isn't listening.

"I love Sandy," Jared says so quietly Jensen almost doesn't hear it. Only he did.

There is silence. And then, a whisper. "What about me?" He hopes Jared didn't hear it. Only he did.

"I love you to, Jen. You know I do."

If you did, this would never happen. I would be happy. There is silence again and it's killing him. "You can't," he says after a few seconds. "You just can’t."

"Can’t what, Jen?" Jared asks.

"You can't fucking love us both! Y-you can't marry her." Please.

It’s only after the words are out in the open he realizes what he’s just said. He wants to hit himself. To bury himself deep down in the ground. Jared doesn't speak. And that is what hurts the most. "Jared." He tries to get him to react. To say something.

"I'm sorry," Jared repeats. Fucking sorry. And it takes everything in Jensen's will power not to burst out in tears, get down on his knees and beg Jared to stay and never let go.

Jared is looking right at him. "Can I… can I kiss you?" he asks.

"Can you what? Are y-you fucking kidding me Jared?" Jensen answers. Because come the fuck on. Kiss him?

"Just… let me… One last time?"

Jensen’s just too afraid to tell him that if he kisses him he would never let him go. Not even after he’d left. Not ever. But he doesn't even get the chance to say something. To object. Because Jared's lips are on his in a matter of seconds.

It's their worst and best kiss ever. Everything and nothing. To much and not barely enough. It's hurt, comfort, pain, love and lust all together. And when Jared breaks the kiss and takes a step back the tears that Jensen has been holding back since the moment Jared told him about the engagement finally fall. But none of that matters any more.

"Jared?" he asks. "Why did you come here?"

"Goodbye Jensen." It’s not Jen. It’s Jensen, Jared whispers.

And then he's alone, again.


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feedback is love.

Comments

[identity profile] sacrament666.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 01:31 pm (UTC)
you wanted to make me cry with Jen? So mission's accomplished. It's too sad and so beautiful written. Thank you so much! *but i really want more maybe just dream but anyway* :)
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 01:48 pm (UTC)
OMG thank you so much its really important for me to know it touched people.
I know its a little to sad but i felt that this is how it should end.

*Don't worry maybe ill write something less sad later on*

Thank you for reading!
[identity profile] hoveringon.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 02:38 pm (UTC)
Owie :(
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:40 pm (UTC)
:(
[identity profile] kynikey.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 02:44 pm (UTC)
That was heartbreaking and I just wanna hug poor Jensen and make it all better. Love it!
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:42 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah, well i want to hug him every chance i get but... yeah, Especially here.
[identity profile] credulesque.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC)
I properly have tears in my eyes now. This was just amazing and soooo sad.
Omg I am crying now! Damn hormones :P
Seriously, well done.
=D
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it even if it made you cry...
thank you so much!
[identity profile] wuzzlybear.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 04:59 pm (UTC)
Jesus! That made me hurt so bad!
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
Oh sorry.:(

Thanks or reading!.
[identity profile] lycaness.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 05:29 pm (UTC)
Told you you'd have everyone crying into their computers didn't I? ;)
Really well done, I still love it, it's so sad.
*cries*
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
Yeah, you were totally right!.
I'm so glad you liked it.

And thanks for everything.:)
[identity profile] cloex-brosluvr.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 06:17 pm (UTC)
Now I have a boo-boo on my heart.
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:53 pm (UTC)
Sorry, don't really know what you mean.
[identity profile] cloex-brosluvr.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 08:58 pm (UTC)
I meant that this story broke my heart. It was sad.
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
Oh.Well thanks for reading, and i hope you liked it even though it was sad.
[identity profile] evenstar-1203.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 06:32 pm (UTC)
*cries* Oh god :/
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC)
Oh i'm sorry :(

Thanks for reading!
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[identity profile] bonbonschnecke.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 06:55 pm (UTC)
Great now I am depressed....*Sobs* That was wonderful written but damn so sad!
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 2nd, 2008 08:03 pm (UTC)
Thanks,i'm glad you liked it even if it was sad.
[identity profile] sarahk-63.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2008 12:33 am (UTC)

Oooooouch!

The following two sentences, just blew me away, simple yet so terribly effective in describing the whole situation.

"You're sorry? What do you mean you're sorry? Sorry doesn't cut it, Jared." Not Jay.

and

"Goodbye Jensen." It’s not Jen. It’s Jensen, Jared whispers.


[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 3rd, 2008 10:58 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading!
[identity profile] danaid-luv.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2008 11:18 pm (UTC)
No, no no no no. *pulls hair*

This was...horrible & painful & just a little bit crushing...but really nicely done. Gads. Thanks, I guess. ;)
[identity profile] fanofsuper.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2008 02:36 am (UTC)
That was so sad. Poor Jensen, I just want to give him a big hug & tell him everything is going to be all right.

Just a few things I noticed & not meant to offend in any way

It will only make things a lot worst should be worse

your with her now should be you're

Me nether should be neither

"I love sandy should be Sandy
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2008 11:06 am (UTC)
Thanks for telling me!. I fixed everything you said.

Thanks for reading.:)
[identity profile] fanofsuper.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 8th, 2008 10:41 pm (UTC)
You're welcome X 2
[identity profile] timetodance410.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 14th, 2008 06:04 am (UTC)
The last line was like a little slap in the face for me, seriously. Because it means they’re not even friends anymore, it’s all gone and that’s got to hurt like hell. Seeing the person you love more than anything with someone else, moving on and living this happy little life and now you guys are nothing, but you have to pretend that you're so happy for them even though your life seemed to trip and fall the moment theirs began. He wasn’t the first choice - that stings.

Jared's not allowed to call him Jensen all serious-like.

-pout-
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Apr. 14th, 2008 06:14 am (UTC)
Yeah.It was my choice to make it really rough I wanted something strong.
And yeah, now Jensen has to pretend like he's all happy but the one person that he loved had left him.

I hope you liked it even if it was so hurtful and sad...
[identity profile] burned-phoenix.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 01:57 pm (UTC)
damn, that hurts! very well written though. :)

BUT, I'm more into the AU *hopes you'll write some more quicky* :)

*hugs*
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC)
Well there is a happy ending to this one (well actually two more parts) And thank you! :DDD

LOL I will don't worry! :D

*hugs back*
[identity profile] burned-phoenix.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 05:53 pm (UTC)
I THINK I read this before, all three of them, but I can't be sure before I read the other two :D


could be that it was still back in my denial phase *G*


YAY!! *dances around you* :D
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 05:56 pm (UTC)
Oh okay. :D

Denial phase? Please elaborate!
[identity profile] burned-phoenix.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 06:09 pm (UTC)
that's when I started reading real person fics but didn't want to admit it yet *g*

I didn't want to read them, because they are real people after all that are written about and stuff, but I didn't have anything else and then I totally fell in love with them and now I can't stop reading them anymore :D

well, now I even write them *g*
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 06:11 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah, been there... But it totally ruined me. I am addicted now lol. :P
[identity profile] burned-phoenix.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 15th, 2008 06:15 pm (UTC)
:D me too, me too :D

*hugs*
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[identity profile] princesslanie.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 02:31 am (UTC)
omg their broke. fix them. please.
[identity profile] mikeyrhcp.livejournal.com wrote:
Oct. 27th, 2008 04:37 am (UTC)
Oh they will be fixed. :)
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